Should We Stop The Long Sales Letter Madness?

Over the last weeks I have been getting more and more tired of long sales copies. As a matter of fact, all the products that Affiliate Classroom sells are planned for a complete site re-do that involve no long sales copy.

Since I started online, I have seen nothing but long sales copies and so that is just what I started doing as well. Then, a few months back I sat down and thought about the things I buy and when I really read the sales letters…

I realized that I almost NEVER read the sales letter, as a matter of fact - it’s gotten so bad that when I want to find the price of what I’m buying I have to do a “CTRL + F” on my keyboard and SEARCH for the $ symbol.

But then that doesn’t work that great either! Why? Cuz of all those crazy “bonus value ‘oober goober’ stuff…”

I was so happy to see this posting by James D. Brausch titled “Long Copy Sucks And Other Heresies

James makes mentions of various tests he did to prove that he is right - he even used the top selling products on Clickbank (the god of having products with long sales letters) - guess what he found?

The top selling products, a huge majority of them had SHORT sales letters!

I immediately went to check it out. I used the Money & Employment category first since it is also the most profitable category in the Clickbank marketplace. I went to each of the first 10 sites and did a “Print Preview” and shoved the page count into a spreadsheet. At the end, I graphed those 10 data points and then superimposed a linear line on the graph.

The original study data was confirmed. As we went down the list in order of receding profitability, we also increased in number of pages of sales copy on average.

I’m sorry big timer copywriters - I’m officially starting to move to the other side slowly :(

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5 Comments

Hi Anik

Don’t you realise you’re being a heretic?

For many years marketers have been asserting that longer sales copy usually sells better, and this has been shown time and time again in testing.

However I wonder if, in this Internet age, we are seeing so many online sales pitches that we don’t bother with anything that looks as though it will take too long to read. Personally I won’t read a long blog.

Probably all of us should be testing this for ourselves, as what works for one type of business probably won’t work for another. My impression is that you need to ‘give’ the potential customer some useful information first before you can expect to sell anything. You obviously follow this principle, and it certainly seems to be successful :)

A long time ago marketing was easy. If you wanted to sell more of something then you reduced by price by 10% and put up a Sale sign. Largely because online business offers so many ways to market products and services it is difficult to select the methods which will be most suitable. So see what works for you.

Geoffrey Ponder
www.Networking-Knowledge.com
Business Marketing by establishing Personal Relationships

Comment by Geoffrey Ponder | August 25th, 2006 3:33 am | Permalink

How refreshing to hear what I’ve always thought but I’d go even further, old cynic that I am..

Many sales letters seem to be pitched at individuals who have never bought anything online before whereas I’m sure, at least in the affiliate marketing area, the readers of the sales letter are regular, often savvy, shoppers.

So yes I KNOW that there’s an iron-clad guarantee, I KNOW that this special price will only be available for a limited period of time or that it’s only being sold to a limited number of people. I am aware that if I don’t act now that I will never have this opportunity again.

Yes I realize that the 20 FREE bonuses I’ll get have a combined value of $63,495 and that all these people reviewing it think it’s the best thing since sliced bread.

Eerm what was your product again? What does it do? Heck there’s no ‘back to top’ link and I ain’t going to scroll all the way up there - CLOSE WINDOW! Oh look a ‘pop-under’ “yes I’m sure I want to leave your long sales pitch thank you”.

Clive McGonigal
www.affiliate1page.com
The Affiliate Marketeers Home Page

Comment by Clive McGonigal | August 25th, 2006 5:08 am | Permalink

Thanks, Anik! It’s about time! I’ve been wondering for awhile if I was the only one who was getting sick and tired of having to scroll down, like, forever to find out what it would cost me!

I’m a 51-year-old newbie and I’m already tired of these tedious million-page sales letters! Look people, I know you are trying to sell me something, so stop with the pitch already! There are only three things I want to know: What is it? What can I do with it if I get it? How much is it? That’s all I need to know to make up my mind if I want to buy it or not! If I have to work to find out, later! Perhaps I have missed out on a few things I could’ve used, but I sure wasn’t going to waste any more of my precious time searching for a price.

I know how I feel and I know my potential customers feel the same way. If any of my sites go beyond ten pages, somebody slap me! I must be selling the wrong product to the wrong people if I can’t convince them they need this in ten pages or less!

I’ve been in face-to-face sales my entire life. I’ve developed a gut instinct of knowing when to shut my mouth and let them mull over what I said. And I’ve been very successful because of that.

So, yeah, all of you guys (and gals) out there hawking your products, you should seriously give some thought to this. Do you want to stand out in the flood of long sales letters? Then get to the point and stop yapping on and on and on!

What is it? What can I do with it if I get it? How much will it cost me?

Maybe I’m weird, the bonuses have never really factored into my purchasing decision. I’ve either got them or it’s just more of the same bs everyone else is giving away for free that I’ve already passed on, so it’s worthless to me. How many copies of Million Dollar Emails does a guy need?

And don’t be afraid to show the price! Why are more and more of these guys making me click on the order link and go to the credit card info page before I can find out how much it is? Note to all of you who are doing this: It’s a trick that is not working! You are not getting my money! Are you that ashamed of the price that you have to hide it? I shouldn’t have to work to get an answer to a very simple question: How much?

So, yeah. Short copy. Inspire me, don’t bore me. You want to impress someone? Make your site stand out by it’s being short and to the point.

And, of course, test. Depending on the product, maybe ten pages converts better than five. Maybe five pages converts better than fifteen. Testing is the only way you’ll find out.

Again, Anik, thanks for bringing it up. It’s like a breath of fresh air!

Comment by Allen Farlow | August 25th, 2006 6:12 pm | Permalink

I agree, I’ve never read an entire salesletter unless I have a strong relationship with the marketer, for example I read 50% of Brad Callens SEOELITE salesletter and would have read more if I had a few more weeks, I only did this because Brad had “Given” first in his ecourse and had outlined the benifiets to me while at the same time teaching me some killer seo techniques.

Plus All my salesletters are based on Ken Evoy’s Ideas Outlined in his free copywriting ebook, which I thinks great! and for god sakes enough with the bonuses!

Comment by Mark | August 31st, 2006 2:20 am | Permalink

Long sales letetrs suck. I don’t bother to read all of what’s in them. i scroll down to the meat and potatoes part — i.e., how much are they hitting me for? Of course, i will get the gist of the thing before I even begin to think of ordering. But I noticed the pattern years ago! I actually have found myself laughing out loud as I notice how very similar these sales letter formats are. I can almost predict what;s in them and where. Yeah, someone told me the marketers do that because “It’s effective.” Huh? I say it can be just as effective (if not more so) if the seller keeps it shorter. I wonder where the thing started in the first place and then everybody else became a copy cat. As a former teacher of English, I am amused. I would flubkj most of the sellers for lack of imagination and originbality!

Comment by Tony | November 19th, 2006 5:11 pm | Permalink

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